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Mamajanaynay
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PostSubject: Need help deciding    Need help deciding  EmptyMon Feb 04, 2019 3:48 pm

I've entered into a sims 3/4 modeling competition called Focus (you can see it https://forums.thesims.com/en_US/discussion/954669/focus-applications-closing-on-the-5th). The first assignment has been posted and those who want can get a jump on completing it but can't post it until after the 5th. Anyway...I NEED HELP deciding which one looks the best!

I've done 5 different assignments thinkin Can you help me?

assignment 1 take 1
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assignment 1 take 2
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assignment take 3
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assignment 1 take 4
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assignment 1 take 5
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PostSubject: Re: Need help deciding    Need help deciding  EmptyMon Feb 04, 2019 4:33 pm

Based on the theme I like
assignment 1 take 3 since it shows action.
assignment 1 take 5 is second fav for the overall composition and pose.
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PostSubject: Re: Need help deciding    Need help deciding  EmptyMon Feb 04, 2019 6:27 pm

I think the last one is the best.


No.1: The upper foot looks as if it floats above the building. The way she leans forward suggests she should be standing on that foot. Also is her face strangely distorted.

No.2: Here also the feet don't look as if they are in the right place. And I think it's a little boring.

No.3: This could be my favorite, but it doesn't work. She is standing way in front that building that she could hit it with her other foot. Her lower foot should be in the area of the intersection, can you see?
Maybe you should try to move your model back, perhaps you have to scale it down a little. the crushing foot could hit the building not right at the top
On one side I think for the theme No.3 would be perfect.
BUT - and that's a big but! - it reminds too much of  September 11  


No.4: Perspective inconsistency  here too, the arm rests too far in front. It should be at least in one line with where the body submerges, possibly a little behind that line.


No.5: The perspective is right here, nothing that jumps at me and the pose is interesting.
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PostSubject: Re: Need help deciding    Need help deciding  EmptyMon Feb 04, 2019 7:47 pm

Thank you @EuphorialQueen and @lionpaws.


@lionpaws, the way the pose is made (I didn't create this pose) for "take 3" it is difficult to make my model have her foot in the intersection without making her extremely skinny. I can't scale her down as the assignment calls for the model to be portrayed as larger than the buildings. Think ladygodzilla. But I do see what you mean by it looking like her "kicking" foot isn't placed well. My aim for this picture was to make it look like she was doing a karate kick to the top of the building and it shattering. And now that you mention it, I do see how it could offend someone because of 9/11.

On that note, I may have to rethink on some idea's and maybe come up with something else. I have to use those backgrounds for the assignment as the host provides all the backgrounds. There is one that she put up but I just can't seem to find that right pose for it. I thought I may of had an idea but I can't find the link or the creator of who did a pose I saw last night when I was searching. I thought I downloaded it but apparently I hadn't. Mad Head Desk It was a pose pack of different standing poses with camera's.
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PostSubject: Re: Need help deciding    Need help deciding  EmptyTue Feb 05, 2019 4:00 am

Oh, how difficult!
I know nothing about poses in Sims4, I never did an edit with the Sims4. Sorry if I overstepped.

I'm sorry if I messed up your ideas. That was in no way my intention.
I like all your pictures very much. You are a great artist and your model is gorgeous.


I didn't mean to be harsh or anything, for my excuse I can only say
I learned to do trompe l' oiel (where you try to paint things as realistically as if you could touch them) and any little unevenness in perspective irks me, so i jumped right on it, sorry Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: Need help deciding    Need help deciding  EmptyTue Feb 05, 2019 10:42 am

@lionpaws wrote:
Oh, how difficult!
I know nothing about poses in Sims4, I never did an edit with the Sims4. Sorry if I overstepped.

I'm sorry if I messed up your ideas. That was in no way my intention.
I like all your pictures very much. You are a great artist and your model is gorgeous.


I didn't mean to be harsh or anything, for my excuse I can only say
I learned to do trompe l' oiel (where you try to paint things as realistically as if you could touch them) and any little unevenness in perspective irks me, so i jumped right on it, sorry Embarassed

Don't be sorry @lionpaws! And you didn't overstep at all. I asked for help and help is what I received. It's always best to have more than one set of eyes to look at something and critique it. What you saw I didn't until it was pointed out, then I saw what you were seeing. Did that make sense? Lol. Anyway, I'm glad you posted what you saw and felt.

I also came up with this picture. You know those poses I was hunting for that I said I saw and thought I downloaded? Well hallelujah I found them! (and bookmarked the creator! giggle ) I really don't care too much for this one as to me it just feels...empty.

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PostSubject: Re: Need help deciding    Need help deciding  EmptyWed Feb 06, 2019 4:59 am

I love the one with the blur.
The viewer, I,  focuses on the model.  and in reverse the model is focusing on the city - WOW! cheers cheers cheers

I hope the judges see what I see. Good luck, whichever picture you turn in. BigHug
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PostSubject: Re: Need help deciding    Need help deciding  EmptySun Feb 10, 2019 8:51 am

Thanks @lionpaws BlowingKiss

I decided to go with the one with my model doing the karate kick to the building, but I did tweak the pose just a little bit so her foot didn't look like it was in front of the building.

I will post what my score is for this assignment once it is posted. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Need help deciding    Need help deciding  EmptySat Feb 16, 2019 1:29 pm

Those are all really Good!  You rock. Cool I like them all.
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